Thanks a lot for your fav

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Appriciate the fav add.

It's rather wierd opening your DA page to see myself in the bathtub. I forgot about that picture for a while. (I might put the photograph up, it looks better)
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thank you for the favourite on "dancing in the dark"


kisses,
don't drink and drive, you might spill your beer!

thankyou for the favourite ::smiles::

Hjyaa, thanks for the fave!

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I read about three of your poems before I had to stop. There's nothing really wrong with your concepts and the images are mostly well-described (if a bit cliched...) However, the implementation of your themes is too childish! They need punctuation, grammatical-corrections, and some real examination. Do you really need to use all of those words to put your point across? If not, then the phrases need to be slashed, and most of them need it badly.

I hope that the critique is helpful rather than simply cruel. And most of all, I hope that it can help you improve your poetry in both an aesthetic and artistic sense.

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Thanks for the two [Favourites] !!
I'm really Glad you like my stuff,
it means alot to me and Thankyou.^^.

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i meant comments

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thanks for the comment

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